In this revision, I focused on directly consulting feedback from the first time I submitted this work. My first Manifesto was submitted in a video format, but due to the shorter time frame for this revision it is in the format of a story board, where the script is lined up with the selected visuals. I altered the backing and grounds of the Manifesto, working specifically to make the argument more compelling. Additionally, I aimed to define a more specific audience, of which being households and parents with enough money to switch to an electric vehicle. I feel that these revisions help to put forth a more effective and compelling Manifesto, which comes across with more passion and urgency than the first time around. I am very passionate about the need for the world to transition to electric cars/sustainable energy, and I believe that this revised version helps to better assert that view and convince others to join the cause.